xanthan gum

I believe it was actually "ticks" as in "ticks of a clock". I was talking about time. Sad to say I used to write like this...hah

haha get back to this. just dropping in to say i'll love it. dont worry, indepth later - just commenting so i know to come back.

Chapter One Jack had grown a lot over the summer, for which he was thankful. He wouldn’t have appreciated going to his new school in Connecticut short and underdeveloped, less ...

See, what I was planning on doing was introducing this aspect and then jumping foward to the main character a handful or so years later, in which this character will ...

The second Prolouge or..something Anything that, in happening, causes itself to happen, happens again. --Douglas Adams The man’s breath preceded him around the corner, and when he followed it was ...

Genocide. I believe a man preached to a group of people to drink poisoned kool aid. i'm not sure, though.

Or no post - get the actaully literature back up there, zany =]

My only complaint is that you use a lot of punctuation at the ends of the lines, mainly commas. Usually, these are needed. But in some cases it can be ...

This was thick to read, but most definitely worth it. I think the feeling would be lifted a bit if it were easier, but then again, I cannot beg aganist ...

The point was that it's 50 days until Pentecost, I believe. So that's how long Jesus was amongst the rest of the world after his death until he rose into ...

This fits the rhyme pattern, it's a beautiful image and you displayed it beautifully. I don't favor haikus, but this one was constructed properly - so good job.

I must agree with Inertia - this poem feels bland despite the meaning behind it. Perhaps with a slight elaboration, or with a bit more emotion shining through, this could ...

I agree with the above comments. The lines continued to get shorter and forced and awkward as the poem went on, until I came to the point that the ending ...

I'm glad you messaged me to tell me you changed this. In this new form, I find it ten times more easier to read. If you ever linger over this ...